When I was young, Ihad developed a liking for pottery from a summer school course . I loved making pots and painting them in my own vivid colours . I made pots . Many pots and they beautiful because I was only a child and I had imagination and time at my disposal . I mostly gifted my pots to those who liked my work and always was told that I should save it for my private collection ; however, as long as it made some one else happy , I would go on doing that. But, I never gave away the first one I made ; I could just never do that , it was very dear to me .
Once I met a guy , I liked the way he loved my art and gifted him my first handmade pot . He were delighted as thought I gifted him a pot of gold . A few days later he returned that and sent a note saying - this is damaged with a crack , thanks though.
like pots we are, damaged, broken and fragile can never look the same again once broken .
Once I met a guy , I liked the way he loved my art and gifted him my first handmade pot . He were delighted as thought I gifted him a pot of gold . A few days later he returned that and sent a note saying - this is damaged with a crack , thanks though.
like pots we are, damaged, broken and fragile can never look the same again once broken .
This was so short, sweet and touching!
ReplyDeletethanks love :)
ReplyDelete1.) Don't add space between a word and a punctuation. It's profoundly irritating.
ReplyDelete2.) Now that you have audience waiting for your next blog post. Least you can do is make your blog error free pertaining to grammar and spellings.
3.) You might want to change your background picture and font color; should add contrast between them.
4.) Personally, i like this way of writing as mentioned in the above comment, "short, sweet and touching! "
5.) I am waiting for your next blog post.
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Hi Sonia,
ReplyDeleteYou have a unique writing style which is a delight to read.
Also, you have the ability to say so much in so few words.
Loved this post.
Regards
Vikram
Vikram Karve
Academic and Creative Writing Journal Vikram Karve
Thank You sir :)
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